Hi! I made up a poem, and I wanted you to see it. hear it goes:
I went to the door, sat on the floor, got on my shoes and went out the door.Got in the car, went to far got to come back and get my sack. Did you like it? pleas comment.
.P.S. Grandpa pleas print it out.
6 comments:
Good poem, Luke. It's pretty short though. Did you want Grandpa to put it in a picture frame like Katie's?
Do you want him to keep it like it is, or do you want to add another verse or two?
Keep up the good work.
Love,
Grandma N.
Love it, Luke! Great job. Wasn't it fun to see it just pop in your head like that? I'd like to hear another verse, too. I didn't think about extending it like Grandma. What do you think?
Sweet poem, dude!
Grandma, yes for the picture, and no for more. Mom, no for more.Isaac thanks!
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WHAT!
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